COLLABORATIVE PAINTING

I have another collaborative painting to share with you.

my reasons for selecting the piece is as follows
1. quite characteristic of Guilin landscape
2. a new way of "churn" ( texture) that most of you have not attempted before. looks easy, but requires real Xieyi movements
3. wet staining of clouds/mist
4. distinct ways of showing perspective, shading. ranges from relatively colorless foreground, to "splash ink" method of distant hills.
should be a lot of fun.
The above is a direct quote from the e-mail I sent out to the group.

The image on the bottom is the original work that I lifted from a publication. The image on the top right is our work.

The original work is almost monochromatic with distinct separation of foreground and background landscapes. The brush strokes are deliberate and yet expressive. Succinct and yet interpretive. Tidy and yet free. I find myself transported to this serene Shangri-La., allowing myself to be immersed in this magical mist, floating as my spirit directs me.

Before we arrive at how our work turned out, let us go through the process of painting.

As I pointed out in my e-mail, the "churn" (texture) method in this work is different but quite common in a lot of the Guilin landscape paintings. It is basically a series of L shaped brush strokes stacked on or intersecting each other.
It could be done with straight tip down and side tip across or vice versa. This gives the lime stone land mass its cracks and shows the thickness of the slabs.
If these were done too orderly, you end up with a brick wall.

Black dots denote vegetation, but they are used to soften up the contour lines and corners. Green vegetation dots need to have titanium white mixed in them to stand out.

Mists are done with the wet wash method. It takes a while to get used to the idea that as you are painting the bottom of the rocky masses, you are actually painting the mist/cloud ( blank space ). Therefore the blank space as a real space is almost like a novice flying a on coming RC plane. Left rudder turns the plane to the right!

Color is witnessed by laying down several layers of pigments. Imagine staining a tissue paper with one pass of color. It is not substantive. We first lay down our shading with various shades of ink. Then vermilion is used as the base coat, followed by burnt sienna and purple around the dark areas. Finally mineral green is used as the top coats. Its opacity drowns out the foundation colors. By moderating the number of layers of the opaque colors, we can achieve the different hues of the landscape. The coloring is done after all the shading and churn is done. Coloring is akin to putting on your clothes. You do that after you have clean underwear, showered, shaved, put on your make-up, then put on your clothes.

Based on the fact that this was done with many people, all with varying degrees of craftsmanship, this is indeed an awesome piece of work.

How does that compare with the original work?? Obviously our brush strokes are far inferior. Our contour lines lack the controlled thickness, our side tips were too broad. Our rocky spires seemed too symmetrical when compared to the original. Many of our trees grow sideways instead of opposing gravity. Our mountain goats had the wrong thorax to abdomen scale and therefore look more like dogs than goats. The branches on the bottom left corner lacks the tensile feel of a whip. Brush strokes tapered at both ends and is fat in the middle and lacks "chi" or spirit. Contrast that with the ones on the upper right hand corner. The tree branches here show interesting angles, are not tapered and fat in the middle, and has tensile strength. I have no way of knowing who painted which tree, but this is a grand example to demonstrate the importance of brush strokes in Chinese Brush painting. This style of painting is all about Bi Fa. (method of the brush)

Our work is not so much monochromatic, so it imparts a different feel to it. This presents a strong argument for supporting emulation as a way to learn to paint. The image might be similar, but the results are distinctly different, and it is a teachable moment to be able to discern and describe the differences.

The original work is done by a famous contemporary Chinese artist by the name of Bai Xueshi. ( Bai is the last name, first name is Xueshi) For those of you who are interested in this artist, you can find a wealth of information on the net about him. Even U-tube showed videos about him.