A Quorum of Geese

It is time to get back to my geese project.

While I was preoccupied with painting my horse, the thought of how to create a geese painting was still churning away in the background.  Unfortunately I am no closer to the goal than a couple of months ago.  I can't keep writing off my hesitance as being pensive, so I decided to face my demon....  out comes the paper and brush.

My theory is that despite the absence of a concrete idea as to how the painting might end up, perhaps I have a subconscious impression of my painting to be.  So I'll be a good listener and hear myself out.

I have chosen a paper that I normally do calligraphy on.  It is more absorbent than the regular Xuan and the brush strokes tend not to bleed.  I was also drawn by its native yellow gold color;  perhaps I could utilize that background color.  This piece of paper is 6 feet wide, I decided to use the whole thing.  I was gearing up for failure already.  My rationale for using the entire 6 ft was that if I screwed up I could start all over without missing a beat. This way I could just paint continuously until there was  no empty space left and I could always crop to size only the desirable sections.  Smart decision !


Armed with such a game plan, I started to lay down a bunch of geese:

Then I decided to take advantage of the paper's yellow color and made the scene as if bathed in the glow.  I used gamboge and cinnabar and mixed in some titanium white for the added blocking effect.  I now wanted the geese to look a little hazy.  I also painted in some smaller, blurry geese to the right, to achieve  a little bit of depth perspective.

I blocked in some landscape for depth perspective.  The darker emphasis is on the left side of the painting,  to contrast with the right.

Tidied up the background.  Showed some highlight on a few select geese,  and called that a wrap, for now.  I might not like some of the individual birds, but I have grown fond of the overall mood of the painting.  I'll hang it up and stare at it for a few weeks and see what else comes to mind. 

I decided to add in the white highlight on the butt of the geese.  I perceived that was also a trade mark, just as the banding on the head.  I wonder if I over did it? 

Oh, did I mention this is a six footer? I wonder how I am going to mount it.  If I use my Xuan-boo method, the warm tone would be restored once I applied the gel;  and I do like that warm fuzzy feeling!

We have a problem

I have been casting that occasional glance at my horse paintings, especially the joie de vivre  piece.
These seemingly casual encounters actually help to form the basis of a non-analytical analysis.  What an oxymoron!  What I meant is that I started to feel instinctively something is good or bad, and that motivates me to pry into the causes for my concerns.

I felt that something is amiss. 

Well let me see what is good first.

I liked the effect of the white margins left by the alum solution.  As I said before, my inclination to use alum is probably due to my inadequacy in my brush strokes, my Gi Bun Gong, and my lack of control of the proper amount of water.  A good painting is a successful interplay of ink, water, paper and brush.  I have used different types of Xuan paper.  Aside from different absorbency and tendency to bleed, some will retain a more distinctive margin in between brush strokes.  Since I am not a connoisseur of Xuan or ink, I only had the pleasure of chance encounters with said products.  I do not know enough to seek out a particular type or brand to acquire.

Anyways I was able to portray the apparent feel of tendons and muscles by giving them definition with white margins in the following example:

The white margins left by alum also helped to add layer and depth in the hairs of the mane and tail:

And of course I love the body language of the horse, enough to name it  joie de vivre.  What gives this painting a sour taste is the neck area of the horse.



I suppose the painting of animals do require a certain understanding of anatomy.  In this particular case the strong neck muscles needed to control that long cervical spine is totally missing in the representation.   What I have depicted is almost like kids playing with sand on the beach, trying to build a sand horse.  Bucketfuls of sand is piled on top of the chest to depict the neck, without regards to how the neck should be attached for articulation.  What I have erected was a column that I called a neck and placed it on top of the body, without accounting for how this column should be rested on the shoulders.  Hence begging the question, should anatomical proportions and placements be exact when doing Chinese brush painting?  According to 6 doctrines prescribed by Xie He (謝赫 ）likeliness only assumed the number 3 position of relative importance.  Can I write off  this miscalculation by saying brush strokes trump proper anatomy?  I don't know.  I wish I know!

From the painting, we can see the white margin left by the original brush stroke of the neck.

In subsequent shading and augmenting the lines, I had changed the contour of the neck column.

This is the result after digitally erasing the extraneous brush strokes outside of the white margin to shape the neck better.  Does this alteration render a better fit for the neck to the shoulders?

 

 

Did this simple change breathed new life into the painting?

Joie de vivre

I had my Happy Year of the Horse painting pinned on my wall;  indulging myself in narcissistic glaring sessions.

After the initial euphoria had subsided, I stepped back and began my self critique phase.

I need better looking lower limbs on that horse.

I started with the same basic outline of the animal, but with a broader stroke.  I was going for sort of a boneless brush stroke, creating more of a silhouette than outlines.  I was hoping this would make my brush more expressive.

I was treating the lower shanks more like a calligraphy stroke;  with discrete stops and lifts and pressure variation.  I also pre-wet my brush with alum solution.  As you recall from all my toying with alum solution, I was going for that discrete white margin around the brush strokes.  As I overlay and correct my lines, these white margins would give an illusion of muscle groups and tendons.  If I was a master in brush painting, I would have left the "white spaces" to my brush but I am not at that level yet.  Thus I cheated with my faithful alum solution!

Another thing I need to mention is that I had tried to paint the mane and tail with side tip strokes and they just don't look right.  After I looked at Xu Beihong's horses, I realized that they should be done with center tip brush strokes.  Since the lines go every which way, it is important to rotate the shaft of the brush such that the tip is always lined up with the changes in direction, thus maintaining the center tip attitude.


Side tip strokes

 

 

Center tip strokes

This is the revised version of my horse.  I am certain we can still find fault with my techniques and craftsmanship, but I am happy with the expression and the feeling the painting conveys.  I especially appreciate the neck and head movement.

I sense that the horse is speaking to me.  This is a Happy-Go-Lucky horse.  This is a horse with that Joie de vivre swagger.

Wishing you all the same!

Horsing Around (with horses this time)

The last time that I was horsing around, I was trying to paint a herd of zebras back in 2009.  I was more intrigued with the black and white contrast and the shape of the herd.

My motivation for horsing around this time is because of the Year of the Horse in our lunar calendar.  You can say that I am trying a little  harder, and with a little more heart.

I started out by sketching a horse on my sketch book with a brush fountain pen,  just to get a feel of how the animal might look with brushed lines.

 

 

Then I started in earnest with a Chinese brush to doodle on Xuan paper.

 

 

 

I found a reference book with paintings of horses by Xu Beihong( 1895 -1953).  Mr.Xu is acknowledged as an authority of  horse painting in modern Chinese painting.  I tried to study and emulate his brushstrokes and style.  He actually spent some time studying drawing and oil painting in Paris.  I think his horses display a strong sense of Chinese brush strokes mixed with a western flavor  of anatomy and shading.

 

 

 

 

Emboldened by his examples, I tried the following

 

 

 

Using a combination of brush fountain pen, Chinese brush and charcoal, I rendered this horse on drawing pad as the model for my horse painting.

 

 

 

This time around I line drew the horse on Xuan with brush and ink.

 

 

 

Filled in shading.

 

 

 

 

Touched up my lines.  Using the coffee that I was drinking to add further shading.  I thought that added warmth to the tone.