I believe the vertical post on the right is too domineering. It suffocates the painting. I should do the painting all over again, paying attention to what I deemed was wrong. But I just can't motivate myself to do that. I lack that discipline. Rather than investing my energy in re-painting this piece of work, I thought I would cheat and do a digital correction and see if my assessment is correct.
before
so I photoshopped the lower portion of the post away and I really think that did the trick. It helped to open up the painting. It can breathe now. I'll pursue my correction when I am in the mood again.
after
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