I was happy with it.
Until I showed it to my group of Chinese Brush painting friends and to an arts professor.
My friends could not accept the fact that the shadows did not cross the path. They kept assuming the void space was water and in that sense I could have painted in reflections. They simply could not tolerate my attempt at filtering out some details to create sort of an art deco type exercise. I was trying to blend realism with a graphic element.
The art professor had problem with the paths.
Too structured. The edges were too rigid and not xieyi enough,
I was able to present my case. I showed the works by Gong Xian (1618-1689), one of the Masters of Nanjing.
Did he not have a blend of realism and graphic design? He too had a well defined path leading to the house in the bottom painting; and a second void space at the right middle portion of the painting.
I was trying to emulate his Ji Mo ( accumulating ink ) technique.
I had four months to think about everything. Over time I became less defensive and more willing to accept other viewpoints.
Since I've been doing a lot of black and white paintings as of late, I decided to really play up the ambiance of this painting.
I made a strong presence of light coming from behind the trees. The shadows now sprouted across the page to amplify the light source. The prominent pathways are now reduced to bright patches, suggesting but not defining trails.
I truly sensed that I've written the final chapter on this painting. There is no room for other changes, only pages of thoughts and suggestions.
This is indeed the epilogue of Chronicle of Shadows.