Remedy for "Multnomah Fall"

The more I looked at the "Multnomah Fall" painting, the more I was itching to do something about it.  As I mentioned in the blog, it was the bilateral symmetry that really bothered me.  I made the painting look like an insert for a tourist guide, or something I lifted from a photograph ( those of you who know me, know how I feel about painting from a photograph..... the resulting work is often  2 dimensional;  without a soul)

(before remedy)



Since the painting was already mounted on canvas, there wasn't a whole lot that I could have done, else I made the Xuan paper too moist and it would wrinkle again and become separated from the canvas.

I used jet black ink to go over the "chuen" again on the left hand side, to try to increase the density of that area.  I did the same for the trees on the right hand side; to add more body to the foliage and to mask the lower black line of the lower fall even better.

At the same time, I added the bright greenish yellow moss on the rock surface.  I did that with my worn brush, using the "split hair" technique.  The moss added some realism to the scene ( hinted the area of the water spray), but most importantly it imparted a lighter color to the back walls, thus helping to pull the background further away from the foreground.

To add a little bit of drama, I put in a few circling birds.  I needed to cover up the messy ink splashes in the sky anyways ( my trade-mark ).

(after remedy)

Now that I am pleased with the remedy, I went ahead and sealed the painting with a gel medium.  The gel makes the painting water resistant and as an added bonus, helps to bring out the depth of the color and recovers some the lost vibrancy.

The changes were minor and not obvious, yet they helped to restore some balance to the painting.  I am biased, obviously, since I am the architect behind all this,  but it is my sincere hope that the correct remedy was applied.

Scatter Brain revisited

In my Scatter Brain blog, I mentioned that I got carried away from my original premise, which was a blurry vision of a bridge ( I used a Flying Dutchman  to describe it) set against a lily pond.  Well this brew had been fermenting in my brain for quite a while now.  I finally decided to do something about it.  This time it will be a little more impressionistic, more provocative than descriptive.

To accentuate the "Flying Dutchman", I decided to use a simple warm tone to achieve an overall personality of the painting.  I shall then play with my light values within the confines of this monotone.  I shall paint the lily pads with a saturated tone to set against the foggy image of the bridge and the sky.  I wanted to take advantage of the high contrast neck of the Canadian geese, which complements the flow of the leaves.  Cloud drafts or rain streaks would be used to break up the vast blank space of the sky.  I worked out these details on a plain typing paper.

Everything pretty much went according to plan.  I was being real patient with the sky/background, so I took my time and stained it quite a few times,  intensifying the effect as I went.  Rain streaks was difficult to lay down on moist Xuan.  The streaks would diffuse out too much, so I was happy to make do with light beams peeking through the low clouds.                                                       

(note the flying geese)

Everything went fine until Murphy paid me a visit.  Whilst I was being careful and patient with my washes, I inadvertently splashed some ink onto the sky.  Normally I could blot that off when it was fresh, but I made

the discovery too late;  the ink had fixed.  My innovative brain told me to paint something to hide those splashes.  But what?       How about a few Canadian geese flying overhead;  they would tie in with the pair in the pond nicely.  The problem is that the ink splashes were so much darker than the sky, so I had to paint my flying geese much darker than I would prefer.    I tried to  paint in a few dark clouds but they seemed out of place      After a few attempts, I decided that I better quit while I was ahead.  I felt that I was making the painting worse instead of better,  all because of Murphy.                                                                             

     

                                                               Finally when I mounted the Xuan on canvas, I left all the creases and wrinkles in.    The painting had that feel and look of an antique painting, and I  believe these minute details addsto the ambiance of the painting, albeit not readily perceptible. 

(wrinkled Xuan on canvas)

                                                         

In the end, I am not displeased with this piece of work.  This style of work is particularly suited for the Xuan on canvas mounting.  You really get the benefit of watercolor wash/diffuse effect spliced into the feel of canvas.  In fact I like this one a whole lot better than my original bridge on lotus pond.  Now I just have to get busy making a frame for this piece of work.

Small Wonders

The kids, whom I mentored at their art club  at a middle school showed some pretty amazing works.  We started out by learning a little bit about Chinese brush painting.  They were introduced to the brush and Xuan paper for the first time.  I picked the subject matter of bamboo because it harbors the most basic form of the brush stroke.  The bamboo helps to hone a person's skill on using the center tip; along with varying pressure and ink tone and moisture content, the practitioner can achieve many "happy accidents".

By mentoring these young citizens, I hoped to dispel the notion of China Town art.  I did not want it to be paint by numbers.  Nor did I want it to be stencil work.  At the very minimum,  I wanted the kids to appreciate the techniques involved in using the center tip to effect different shapes.  Of course kids at this age are  a little bit too tender to deal with the so called "virtues" of the bamboo.  Nonetheless, I brought in a live bamboo branch so they could have a first hand tactile connection with the subject.  It is my theory that if you can "feel" it, that feeling can sublime into your work.  My emphasis for these kids was energy over form.  The form would come if one becomes more proficient with the brush, but the spirit still needs to be manifested.

We also did our own mounting of the finished painting.  This allows the first timers to experience the entire process of creating a painting and preserving it.  Interestingly one of the kids  inadvertently tore her painting into halves during the mounting process and was a little distraught.  I was able to mend the halves, perhaps an opportune time to demonstrate how to overcome obstacles, and to remedy mistakes.  Nah, I wasn't that noble, but there is some truth in what I said.

Finally I showed the kids how to cut mats.   I threw in a math problem in the process.  I had the  kids calculate the width of the margins, given the size of the mat and the size of the opening.  I wanted them to be able to at least present their mounted paintings in a matted format, to be able to show off to their parents and friends.  Most importantly, however, is to be able to build a positive self esteem.  To have a sense of accomplishment.  And accomplished, they have!!

The accompanying  pictures are some of the finished works.  (the ones not shown are not because they are not up to snuff, but rather the kids were eager to take them home, before I had a chance to take pictures !)  One must appreciate them not by technical merits ( they had maybe 40 minutes of training ) but from the perspective of a maiden voyage into an alien creative field.